Hey you don't have to read this if you don't want to because it may be long...
In the holidays i went to stay at my nans house until Donna picked me up,
she picked me up at around 5:00pm in Donnas car, I mean come on. Well,
the next day we went to the River we walked because it wasn't that
far away and it was so HOT, we went with Zaenas friends and
at one stage they were crossing this little as log, I thought it was
going to snap, I actually went back and waited for them to come back,
but they ended up finding away across, on a bigger branch, not much
difference but much, much better. The next day we stayed home & they
day after that, and the day after that, well you get my point.
after the second to last day, Wednesday, we caught up with Sam at
the school we had absolutely nothing to do but
I really liked it there because we stayed out til tea time, not
to mention the fact that she lived across the road from the school, my
holiday still goes on. In the morning I waited for Lisa to pick me up,
(Kelsi's mum) and it took a little while because apparently I was supposed
to wait at my nans house. So they came and picked me up, not so late
this time. Well, if you knew Kelsi you would be playing on the Play-
Station 24-7, on a farm i would hvae gone out-side! I didn't really feel like
playing so I watched her play Gran Theft Auto San Ondrea's we actually
got it from one of her mates, I think, so like the next day, and the
next day, but the day after that we went to watch Wall.e in Taupo
because in Putaruru they dont have movies there, we left at around
10am, it was the coolest movie ever, you'd think you wouldn't
understand it but, actually you do!!. the next day there was NOISE
NOISE NOISE almost all day because Oh My Gosh we went to this little
boys birthday, Anthony and he was so spoilt, this little girl was
looking at his stuff and he just grabbed it out of her hands and
started yelling and also this girl Islay was taking control and I
was about to tell her to be QUIET, just as i was about to say be
quiet Kelsi stands up and says "Oi be nice to her, if you've got
nothing nice to say walk away". it was cool as, everyone was
quiet but eventually there was noise and then we had to go
home with Ashley because Lisa was drunk. I better stop
writing because that was the end of my holiday, thank you for
reading!!!! all about... ME!!!
Tuesday, October 14, 2008
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2 comments:
Hey Sammy I found a few spelling mistakes in your story. Like the (I)'s and some ohers as well just wanted to let you know
Tiria
Your holiday must of been cool as i wish i could of come ha ha anyways yeah like what Tiria said found just a few mistakes but the rest was awesome!
Tera
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