My day, My dog!!!

Hello again, today was awesome!! we had Hard Materials and
I really enjoyed it, at Hard Materials we had to make a box, my
box is really cool, I can't seem to figure out how I finished so
early, I mean we have another day of Hard Materials and I had
to start my lid again because I made it un-even, but now
i'm done, but im going to take it back to fix it up a little. Ok enough of
Hard Materials, at home I keep Bragging & bragging & bragging
& bragging my mum because I want a dog for my birthday next year
because I love dogs, I really want a Border Collie but if I can't I
would have a papillon, then theres the french poodle, then theres
the cavalier king charles, but then theres the bulldog, then........
well you get my point. Well i'll be right back if I get a dog someday
Toodles!!!!

personal recount and a factual recount

A Personal Recount is when you are involved in an event. The writer
was personally involved.

A Factual Recount is an event that you were not involved with
you may have gotten it from a friend, or it might have been a police report.

So the difference between a Factual Recount and a Personal Recount
is that a personal recount was an event you were involved with and a
factual is from something like the news paper.

Personal Recount
-Writer involved
-Writers own responses recorded.
-Past Tense.
-First person I, me, we.
-Order of events that happened.
-events related to one event.
-recrientation at the end personal comment.

Factual Recount
-Start general statement, who, when. where.
- Events in order and relate to one event.
- Past tense.
-Third person, is, she, they
-Evaluation at the end. summing up or personal comment.

If you don't really get it just leave a comment so I can make it be more understandable for you, thank you for reading!!!

My Ultra Awesome Holiday

Hey you don't have to read this if you don't want to because it may be long...
In the holidays i went to stay at my nans house until Donna picked me up,
she picked me up at around 5:00pm in Donnas car, I mean come on. Well,
the next day we went to the River we walked because it wasn't that
far away and it was so HOT, we went with Zaenas friends and
at one stage they were crossing this little as log, I thought it was
going to snap, I actually went back and waited for them to come back,
but they ended up finding away across, on a bigger branch, not much
difference but much, much better. The next day we stayed home & they
day after that, and the day after that, well you get my point.
after the second to last day, Wednesday, we caught up with Sam at
the school we had absolutely nothing to do but
I really liked it there because we stayed out til tea time, not
to mention the fact that she lived across the road from the school, my
holiday still goes on. In the morning I waited for Lisa to pick me up,
(Kelsi's mum) and it took a little while because apparently I was supposed
to wait at my nans house. So they came and picked me up, not so late
this time. Well, if you knew Kelsi you would be playing on the Play-
Station 24-7, on a farm i would hvae gone out-side! I didn't really feel like
playing so I watched her play Gran Theft Auto San Ondrea's we actually
got it from one of her mates, I think, so like the next day, and the
next day, but the day after that we went to watch Wall.e in Taupo
because in Putaruru they dont have movies there, we left at around
10am, it was the coolest movie ever, you'd think you wouldn't
understand it but, actually you do!!. the next day there was NOISE
NOISE NOISE almost all day because Oh My Gosh we went to this little
boys birthday, Anthony and he was so spoilt, this little girl was
looking at his stuff and he just grabbed it out of her hands and
started yelling and also this girl Islay was taking control and I
was about to tell her to be QUIET, just as i was about to say be
quiet Kelsi stands up and says "Oi be nice to her, if you've got
nothing nice to say walk away". it was cool as, everyone was
quiet but eventually there was noise and then we had to go
home with Ashley because Lisa was drunk. I better stop
writing because that was the end of my holiday, thank you for
reading!!!! all about... ME!!!

screen licking dog

my first blog

hello everyone my name is Samantha & this is my first blog, i go to
Intermediate school and my class is the best. even thought this
is my first blog i kind of know what to do.
if ANYONE can please leave my a message or anything
so i can fix my page up and fix my work for spelling mistakes
Pip, Pip, Cheero, Ta-Ta PEACE OUT!!