My Holidays

Well, so far my holidays are going great... I have been camping with my friend
Tianna, we had a blast at Rere Whakaatau or something like that, we went to this
place called the hot 'n' cold, it's this river that has to sides to it, a hot side and a cold

side its pretty awesome there, well we went swimming everyday, probably because

the camp site had a lake in it. Well after that I went home for CHRISTMAS!!!! I came

home on Christmas eve, I was camping for almost a week. Well I'll get back to the

subject. For Christmas I got a Nintendo D'S, a key board, a pillow that you plug your MP3/

Mp4 into, a few clothes a piggy bank, some art pencils and that about it!!!! Well if you

don't know this, Jazmine and I are very close friends, so I went to her house after

Christmas, we were supposed to go to stock cars but they closed down because of the

weather so we just went around town, played on our Nintendo together (because she has

one as well) and I basically stayed the night even though we were going to hang out

together for the day, it always ends up like that for Jazmine and I. Well I had to go to

Leah's house early because her parents were going to Cambridge early so, it only took

us 48 minutes to get to her house!!! Anyways it was fun at her house, we danced

heavy metal to Warwick avenue by Duffy, she was annoying her dogs, we went

swimming almost everyday for 50 cents for a WHOLE DAY!!! We done allot of things

actually!! Well I better get on with my holidays, right now Kelsi is at my house and she

is very confusing, I don't really get her sometimes, better yet I can't understand her

half the time she's talking about a movie or something we done yesterday or even

if we are talking about shoes!!! Well she might be going back on Thursday but

if we do mum said we can go to Hamilton zoo!! I'm also allowed to invite 1 more person

so obviously I'm going to invite Jazmine!!

well that's about it for now, got to go now bye!!!

My weekends

hello, i'm back again and i'm here to tell you about what happened

on Saturday. Well I was really super bored so I put up my christmas

tree, it sounds like it's a little to early but for me, I had nothing else to

do. I decided to ring Jazmine, since she had nothing to do and I had

nothing to do, and besides, she asked me to ring her. I rang up

Jazmine and I asked if I could go to her house and I was aloud to.

Well, I went over to Jazmines house and the first thing we had to do

was untangle the christmas lights. Me and Jazmine went inside and

played on the computer and watched T.V. It was boring at the start but

then we went outside and played with Bruno her dog.

TO BE CONTINUED....

friday at the aquatics

Hello again I thought I should keep you updated. Well on Friday
Gold house went to the Aquatics for prize giving, we had to get there
before 9:00am, Jazmine came to my house in the morning so she could
drop off her stuff and we could go to the pools, we both wore stripy tops
and blue pants, but we were kind of different. Well we waited and
waited and waited to go inside, even though we got inside I was a
little worried that someone would get pushed into the pools because
everyone was rushing to get to the stools, luckily no body got pushed into
the pool, we were so EXCITED to go inside the pool, but we had to walk
outside to the outside pool and it took a little while to get setted
down like 10 minutes.

After that the teachers started to talk to us about the rules, rules like
putting sunblock on every time we got out of the pool or wait 15 minutes
after you finished eating and things like that. Well straight after
that we put sunblock on and we went into the pool, I know this story
is really boring but I have to write this. we anyways we swam around
and Tiria was being really weird, she had here full togs shorts and
swimming top, well I told you this because she was putting her hands
inside her top and she was putting her hands together like she was
praying and she was swimming around scaring people well, when I
say people I mean ME, she was scaring me to DEATH I kept on paddling
away from her because she was scaring me, we swam from onside
of the pool to the next, again and again and again.

Well, after that we got out of the pool and Tiria went to go get
her a drink of Fizzy. Usually we aren't allowed Fizzy or Pepsi at our
school but we weren't at school today it took at least 10 minutes to
get the money and get the drink. By the time we started eating Tiria,
Chloe and I went on the playground to waist time, then I heard people
saying it's prize giving time, OH MY GOSH it was about time that it was
prize giving. I got an award for Academic Exellence, Jazmine got an
award for digital excellence and I can't remember what Tiria got hers for.
after that we went for a last minute swim, got dressed and went home.
well thats it for now BYE BYE!!!!

Thursday

Hello Again, well, today we had a whole bunch of crazy
Well at drama today we were going to film our news report
but we didn't, somebody, not going to say who (Dylan & Jordan)
kept on turning off the lights in the board room then Sam was
under the table and he grabbed my leg!! It actually gave me a
fright at first then I was like, "SAM". The other worst part is I was
Wearing this Green wig with little bits of tinsel in it and Dylan was
like "Wheres the mermaid gone", then Collin would rip out some of
the tinsel and he would put it on his head and he was calling himself
the "Air Conditioner". But we didn't even get to film it because the
camera went flat. Apart from that, everything else was CRAZY. We
had to do this test and almost everyone was talking, apart from the
good girls like Tiria, Jazmine, Chloe and I. Sounds a little weird, But
theres more of them, but I won't name them. We also had this health
expo thingy, I went into the puberty tent, I walked straight out of it.
Oh My Gosh there was this germ room tent thing and I had heaps of
germs all of over my hand well not all over, like there was little patches
then I went through this smelly feet room
"Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww" it smelt really, really, really, really bad
so bad that it's worst then stinky blue cheese, after that I had lunch, Tiria
Chloe and I played on the uni cycles, these boys, they were so annouying.
we got bugged all the way back to class and when we played on the uni cycles
. After that we got a growling from Matua and I don't seem how Tiria, Chloe,
Jazmine & I were involved, anyways I have to go, Jazmines bugging me, Bye!!

pinky

My day, My dog!!!

Hello again, today was awesome!! we had Hard Materials and
I really enjoyed it, at Hard Materials we had to make a box, my
box is really cool, I can't seem to figure out how I finished so
early, I mean we have another day of Hard Materials and I had
to start my lid again because I made it un-even, but now
i'm done, but im going to take it back to fix it up a little. Ok enough of
Hard Materials, at home I keep Bragging & bragging & bragging
& bragging my mum because I want a dog for my birthday next year
because I love dogs, I really want a Border Collie but if I can't I
would have a papillon, then theres the french poodle, then theres
the cavalier king charles, but then theres the bulldog, then........
well you get my point. Well i'll be right back if I get a dog someday
Toodles!!!!

personal recount and a factual recount

A Personal Recount is when you are involved in an event. The writer
was personally involved.

A Factual Recount is an event that you were not involved with
you may have gotten it from a friend, or it might have been a police report.

So the difference between a Factual Recount and a Personal Recount
is that a personal recount was an event you were involved with and a
factual is from something like the news paper.

Personal Recount
-Writer involved
-Writers own responses recorded.
-Past Tense.
-First person I, me, we.
-Order of events that happened.
-events related to one event.
-recrientation at the end personal comment.

Factual Recount
-Start general statement, who, when. where.
- Events in order and relate to one event.
- Past tense.
-Third person, is, she, they
-Evaluation at the end. summing up or personal comment.

If you don't really get it just leave a comment so I can make it be more understandable for you, thank you for reading!!!